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Re: [PATCH] docs: Improve spelling of few cases in the documentation
- To: Bernhard Kaindl <bernhard.kaindl@xxxxxxxxx>
- From: Jan Beulich <jbeulich@xxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 15 Jan 2025 12:27:32 +0100
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- Cc: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@xxxxxxxxxx>, Anthony PERARD <anthony.perard@xxxxxxxxxx>, Michal Orzel <michal.orzel@xxxxxxx>, Julien Grall <julien@xxxxxxx>, xen-devel@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Roger Pau Monné <roger.pau@xxxxxxxxxx>, Stefano Stabellini <sstabellini@xxxxxxxxxx>, Ross Lagerwall <ross.lagerwall@xxxxxxxxxx>
- Delivery-date: Wed, 15 Jan 2025 11:27:54 +0000
- List-id: Xen developer discussion <xen-devel.lists.xenproject.org>
On 15.01.2025 11:42, Bernhard Kaindl wrote:
> --- a/docs/admin-guide/microcode-loading.rst
> +++ b/docs/admin-guide/microcode-loading.rst
> @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ distro guidance for microcode loading.
> Microcode can make almost arbitrary changes to the processor, including to
> software visible features. This includes removing features (e.g. the Haswell
> TSX errata which necessitated disabling the feature entirely), or the
> addition
> -of brand new features (e.g. the Spectre v2 controls to work around
> speculative
> +of brand-new features (e.g. the Spectre v2 controls to work around
> speculative
> execution vulnerabilities).
This having been written by a native speaker, I'm uncertain of the strict need
for a dash (also in one or two further places you touch).
> @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Xen will report during boot if it performed a microcode
> update::
> (XEN) microcode: CPU6 updated from revision 0x1a to 0x25, date = 2018-04-02
>
> The exact details printed are system and microcode specific. After boot, the
> -current microcode version can obtained from with dom0::
> +current microcode version can be obtained from with dom0::
Pretty certainly then also s/with/within/ ?
Jan
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