[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next][Date Index][Thread Index] Re: [Xen-devel] [PATCH 3/4] docs/sphinx: Introduction
On 03/10/2019, 21:59, "Andrew Cooper" <andrew.cooper3@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: Put together an introduction page for the Sphinx/RST docs, along with a glossary which will accumulate over time. Signed-off-by: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@xxxxxxxxxx> Reviewed-by: Lars Kurth <lars.kurth@xxxxxxxxxx> There were a few minor improvements which could be made, I am listing these below, but none are show-stoppers. +Xen is an open source, bare metal hypervisor. It runs as the most privileged +piece of software, and shares the resources of the hardware between virtual Maybe better: s/software/software on the system/ or s/software/software on the host/ +machines. + hardware domain + A :term:`domain`, commonly dom0, which shares responsibility with Xen + about the system as a whole. + + By default it gets all devices, including all disks and network cards, so + is responsible for multiplexing guest I/O This is a little unclear: in particular the 1st paragraph. Earlier you talk about hardware domain="responsible for hardware and marshalling guest I/O", which is clearer. Maybe: A :term:`domain`, commonly dom0, which hosts all devices, including disks and network cards and is responsible for multiplexing guest I/O is better Regards Lars _______________________________________________ Xen-devel mailing list Xen-devel@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://lists.xenproject.org/mailman/listinfo/xen-devel
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