Re: [Xen-devel] [PATCH SECURITY-POLICY 3/9] Deployment with Security Team Permission

[Ian Jackson <ijackson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Lars Kurth writes ("Re: [Xen-devel] [PATCH SECURITY-POLICY 3/9] Deployment with 
Security Team Permission"):
> On 19 Jan 2015, at 10:20, Jan Beulich <JBeulich@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > On 16.01.15 at 20:52, <ijackson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> >> +<p>List members may, if (and only if) the Security Team grants
> >> +permission, deploy fixed versions during the embargo.  Permission for
> 
> Better: List members may deploy fixed versions during the embargo, if (...)

The reason I didn't write it like that is that someone who reads only
the first part of the sentence might not see the caveat.

Is my wording unclear ?

Ian.

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